Fic Assistance

[shanachie13]

So after viewing this: community.livejournal.com/savecolby/370135.html


I got an idea for a fic with Colby during a stake out, but well...I'm not sure what direction I want it to go in...so opinions?

Here are the choices:
A) Is it his girlfriend (he doesn't really have one in any of my stories)?
B) Is it just some girl stripping and he gets turned on by this?
or
C) Is it something else? (And you get to give me ideas here).

I wanna do smut people! Suggestions?

Comments

[swingandswirl]

I think it should be his girlfriend. I think if it was some random girl he'd feel all angsty and voyeuristic about it and that's no fun.

[shanachie13.livejournal.com]

Yeah that's kinda the way I was leaning...but now I have to have a reason for his girlfriend to be in the neighborhood and who she is.

[magisterequitum.livejournal.com]

I vote for B!

Despite that it sounds slightly voyeuristic, but for some reason I like the idea.

*iz weird*

[shanachie13.livejournal.com]

So I've got one for A and one for B...someone wanna be a tie breaker here?

Please?

Cuz honestly I can go either way and I don't wanna write 2 fics...and y'all don't wanna hear the suggestions I was given by a friend.

[magisterequitum.livejournal.com]

Macbeth votes for B.

:P

Does that count?

[shanachie13.livejournal.com]

Um, no? LOL, but nice try.

Did you go back to school yet? And did I tell you what I get to do for MY spring break?

[magisterequitum.livejournal.com]

Darn... Macbeth was really gunning for B.

Nope. Go back to school on Sunday. What did you get to do? Do tell.

[shanachie13.livejournal.com]

LOL...well it may very well be B...since I have no idea how to format A.

I get to go to Savannah! My best friend, Daren, lives there and he bought me a ticket to come see him. I've never been and I am super excited!

[magisterequitum.livejournal.com]

BBbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb!!! =)

YAY! That sounds like tons of fun. Yay for you!

[shanachie13.livejournal.com]

It will be...and Daren...crazy boy that he is...has already planned our whole week..LOL and he's had it planned for like two months!

[paranoid-woman.livejournal.com]

Maybe you start with B and when he feels all akward we jump to A... I mean, he discovers that the stripper is his first girlfriend from Idaho or something?

Yeah, my mind went off. *g*

ETA: Deleted and reposted because apparently I don't know that B is not the same as A. *facepalm*

[shanachie13.livejournal.com]

LOL your brain just went off the same way mine did at the image of stripping for Colby. But I think I have the idea of what I'm going to do now...and I picked the song. :-) Colby would love it!